The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates two different locations where a shopping mall can be located in Brandfield.
The first location is situated near the river and the housing estate.
Therefore
, it would be quite a popular zone for spending there your spare time. Moreover
, the railway and the road are located nearby, so it would not be challenging to get to the shopping mall, on the other hand
, the second
variant is also
located near two roads and one railway, as a consequence
, both options can be reached easily.
The second
location is near the industrial estate and is almost circled by the railway and the road therefore
, so, a lot of exhaust fumes are produced there, consequently
, poor air quality is not a big advantage of a shopping mall. On the other side, the second
location is situated much nearer to the city centre than the first one, so probably it would attract tourists, which prefer to stay in the centre.
Overall
, the first option is located just near living buildings and would be optimal for the locals, while
the second
one could be good for tourists.Submitted by mgshetler on
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