Some people believe that children should learn to paint or draw as a subject in their school curriculum. Others think that it is a waste of time and that there are more important subjects that should be taught. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Children’s education in

school

has always highly concerned the parents of children. Some parents may hold the opinions that

students

need to be taught painting and drawing at

school

,

while

some other parents believe that it is useless to engage in painting or drawing curricula, as it is a waste of valuable time. Personally, I am for the former perspective and the reasons for it will be given with examples in

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essay. First of all, art classes

such

as drawing and painting are educational technical curricula that

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originated from our lives. Drawing, as an artistic curriculum, imparts

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of aesthetic feeling to the

students

from a very young age if they start drawing

courses

from the beginning of

school

. As

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children grow up, they gradually obtain knowledge about art, and at the same time, they might consider pursuing

further

as their future

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if they have the desires and the talents. In

this

case, learning how to draw and paint is not just doing a course, it is learning a necessary skill for the

students

to make a living

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in the future.

Secondly

, there is no

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more important course than any other

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. The reason why children need to attend

school

is that they need to develop to full scale and develop comprehensively, which means that they should be educated with both academic

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and edified with artistic

courses

. A student without the cultivation of aesthetics and art may influence the development of his or her other

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of study.

For example

, the student may lack

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perspectives or ideas in composing an article when he or she is doing an English assignment.

To sum up

, it is unfounded to say that

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to draw and paint in

school

is a time-wasting thing for

students

. I firmly believe that

students

should be encouraged to get themselves more involved in artistic

courses

in

school

, rather than focusing on only a few academic subjects which are more considered compulsory and important at

school

.