You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. It's been a long time since we met after graduation. By the

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way I would like to inform you that I have recently moved to a different house. As I said, I have recently migrated to a new home

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near to my office location, which is near Coast Bay, western Sydney, Australia. You know

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is one the best house, which I saw indeed. The home has logged with five rooms including a kitchen and a balcony faced with a picturesque sea view.

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, The lawn is very spacious, and tiled with mosaic flooring with fantastic colour.

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, all rooms are well painted and loaded with wardrobes as well. It is perfectly designed for the check-in of Indeed. So, I am very happy to get in into it. Apart from that, I would like to invite you to my home next month on 23rd Feb, which is on the day of your arrival in my county. I can receive you at the airport. Hope we will meet soon. Best regards, Ram

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

181 words

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You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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