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You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. It's been a long time since we met after graduation. By the
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way I would like to inform you that I have recently moved to a different house. As I said, I have recently migrated to a new home
due to
 near to my office location, which is near Coast Bay, western Sydney, Australia. You know
this
 is one the best house, which I saw indeed. The home has logged with five rooms including a kitchen and a balcony faced with a picturesque sea view.
In addition
, The lawn is very spacious, and tiled with mosaic flooring with fantastic colour.
Moreover
, all rooms are well painted and loaded with wardrobes as well. It is perfectly designed for the check-in of Indeed. So, I am very happy to get in into it. Apart from that, I would like to invite you to my home next month on 23rd Feb, which is on the day of your arrival in my county. I can receive you at the airport. Hope we will meet soon. Best regards, Ram
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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