The graph below shows the numbers of overseas visitors who went to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates data about foreign tourists who visited different places

such

as the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a European country over a twenty-year period between 1987 and 2007.

Overall

, what stands out from the graph is that in 1987 the coast was so popular for visitors and

also

in 2007 it is still the first

distination

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destination

for tourists. Another interesting thing is that the lakes in 1987

considered

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were considered

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as low

leveled

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levelled

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popular

place

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places

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while

in 2007 it

jumping

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jumped

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to second

place

for visitors. Looking at details, the mountains as regards started with 20

thousands

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visitors in 1987 and raising slightly over the period in question and finished in 2007 with approximately 35

thousands

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thousand

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tourist.

However

, in 1987 the mountains

was

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were

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second

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the second

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popular

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most popular

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place

but in 2007 it went down to

last

place

between

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other

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the other

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three options. The next

place

is the lakes which started in 1987 with just 10

thousands

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thousand

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incomer and shut up to 40

thousands

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thousand

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after ten years and

then

increased

considerable

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considerably

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until 2002 with just above 70

thousands

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thousand

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tourists, but after

that

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,that

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it decreased to 50

thousands

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thousand

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and got the second

place

. Another interesting

place

is the coast it started as a first

place

in 1987 and

then

in 2007 again it

considered

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was considered

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as a first popular

place

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