You have just read an article in a national newspaper which clamis that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter - say which point in the article you agree with - explain ways in which your town centre in different from most other town centres. - offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention
on
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an
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article which claims that
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town
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the town
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centres of all countries are looking
same
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the same
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to
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each other in a national newspaper is incorrect. I am giving you my view in the following paragraph.
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with, I would like to point out those contents on which I agree with you.
Firstly
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, you mentioned a variety of shops has same in all
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centres, which is correct. All countries have clothes shops, electronics shops and like that.
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, you
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mentioned the types of restaurants which are now available in all towns
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.
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, my hometown
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is different in some prospects
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then
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other
town
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centres. It has a big club for people. They include all sorts of activities like Yoga, Gym and fitness
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.
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, it has a number of big rooms in which anyone can arrange office meetings, birthday
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and even
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wedding
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. I think it is
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useful location for people. I would like to offer to give a guided tour of my
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which consists
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of all
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location
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details and all
famous
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the famous
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places with
address
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addresses
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and contact numbers to the writer of
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article. So, it will attach
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apply
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in
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release. It can be useful for
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. Thank you for your attention to
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matter. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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