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You have just read an article in a national newspaper which clamis that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter - say which point in the article you agree with - explain ways in which your town centre in different from most other town centres. - offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention
on
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an
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 article which claims that
town
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the town
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 centres of all countries are looking
same
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the same
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to
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as
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 each other in a national newspaper is incorrect. I am giving you my view in the following paragraph.
To begin
 with, I would like to point out those contents on which I agree with you.
Firstly
, you mentioned a variety of shops has same in all
town
 centres, which is correct. All countries have clothes shops, electronics shops and like that.
Secondly
, you
also
 mentioned the types of restaurants which are now available in all towns
center
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centre
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.
In contrast
, my hometown
center
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centre
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 is different in some prospects
then
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 other
town
 centres. It has a big club for people. They include all sorts of activities like Yoga, Gym and fitness
center
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.
Moreover
, it has a number of big rooms in which anyone can arrange office meetings, birthday
party
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parties
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 and even
also
 wedding
ceremony
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. I think it is
more
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a more
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 useful location for people. I would like to offer to give a guided tour of my
town
 which consists
all
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of all
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location
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the location
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 details and all
famous
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the famous
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 places with
address
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addresses
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 and contact numbers to the writer of
this
 article. So, it will attach
it
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apply
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in
next
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the next
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 release. It can be useful for
reader
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. Thank you for your attention to
this
 matter. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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