Some people think that zoos are cruel and all zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoo can help protect animals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Keeping
animals
in zoos
are
being expanded all around the world. Some nations deem that Correct subject-verb agreement
is
zoos
should be totally banned from controling
Correct your spelling
controlling
animals
while
others assume that these places give a helping hand to conserve creatures. In this
essay, I will discuss both these views and give my own opinion with examples.
On the one hand, there is an exceedingly increasing number of animal lovers who complain about wildlife parks where most of which keep animals
in an unacceptable conditions
, especially in the third World countries. Correct the article-noun agreement
an unacceptable condition
unacceptable conditions
Furthermore
, in most zoos
, animals
are kept behing
bars which is not suitable for them since Correct your spelling
behind
animals
are active creatures instinctively. Additionally
, they are fed with
vegetables or fruits Change preposition
apply
while
they are carnivorous and can affect badly their digestive. Correct word choice
apply
For instance
, three months ago in Iran
nearly 59 lions died because of inappropriate diet. Add a comma
,Iran
As a result
, a high percentage of animal protectors oppose by
Change preposition
apply
zoos
and refuse to visit these places and strongly make people aware of these huge prisons.
On the other hand
, the majority of people consider that zoos
can be a protective option to preclude these creatures from dying out forever. Take pandas as an example. They are perfectly protect
in Change the verb form
are perfectly protected
chinese
Change the capitalization
Chinese
zoos
owing to prohibit this
race from extinction. what's more, this
view believers mention that animals
real habitats are not appropriate anymore to survive since most of Change noun form
animals'
animal's
localities
are destroyed because of human activities Add an article
the localities
such
as logging, poisoning water supplies and so on. As a consequence
, not only do zoos
save endangered species but they also
enhance the population of rare animals
.
In conclusion, communities are divided into two groups about
the action of wildlife parks. Personally, I think that both views are correct to some extent but if the government observed and supported Change preposition
regarding
zoos
with investment, Wildfire parks could conserve and block the extinction process.Submitted by mehrdad.salahi2003 on
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