The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The bar graph depicts data about enquiries at a tourist office in the UK in the first two quarters.
Overall
,
it is clear that
letter/e-mail based requests exhibited a downward trend
while
others experienced the opposite.
Firstly
, the number of requests in person dramatically increased in the period. It accounted for nearly 400 in January, which was the lowest and gradually went up in the first three months.
This
doubled in the period which meant it surpassed that by letters. After that time, the quantity suddenly skyrocketed in the next quarter and reached a high of approximately 1900 in June.
Moreover
, enquiries by telephone slightly had a similar trend as those in the physical approach. The figure started at about 900 and decreased by around 100 in February before recovering and increasing to 1000 in March.
However
, it suddenly remained for a month and
then
rocketed to 1600 in the next two months.
Finally
, in terms of letter/email ways, the number constantly declined in the period given.
This
began at close to 800 in January and relatively stabilized until March.
Nevertheless
, it started to drop and reached a low of below 400 in March which was the smallest number of requests in all categories.
This
stayed remained again in the final month.
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