The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbishment. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two period.

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to Ashdown Museum during the

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before and the

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after it was developed.

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, the charts represent the

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of

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during the same period.

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, it can be clearly seen that the number of

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had increased after the

refurbishment

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and it

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dropped before

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refurbishment

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the refurbishment

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during the

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.

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, the

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of

dissatisfaction

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was at the highest position

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no

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was at the least in the

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of

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before

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while

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the figure for

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was higher than

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no

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and very

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dissatisfaction

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during the

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of

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after

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. In terms of the table, there was an increase during the

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of

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after

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at 92,000

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. The proportion of

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before

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was up to 74,000

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during the period. In the stage of charts, the

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of

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and

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had to 40% and 30% respectively before the

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of

refurbishment

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.

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, the figure for no

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had

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the lowest

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at 5%. The proportion of very

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and

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were almost

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between 15% and 10% respectively.

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, after

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the

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of

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rose to 40%

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very

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had to 35%.

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, the result of surveys of visitor

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reached

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15% and the

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of no

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and very

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remained unchanged at 5%.