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The chart show the different how three countries learn English in 2010 and 2015.

The chart show the different how three countries learn English in 2010 and 2015.
The pie charts provide information about the different ways of three
nations
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learned
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 English from 2010 to 2015.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the online
class
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 has an upward trend and the evening
class
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 has a downward trend.
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, at first time, the evening
class
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 is more famous than the online
class
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while
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 it shifts and the online
class
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 is more popular as compared with others. A closer look at the pie charts shows that in 2010 the evening
class
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 of
nations
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 C had many students as compared with others and it gained nearly 100 %. Similar to countries C, A and
B
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 countries were dominated with evening classes almost quarter fifths.
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, the two
nations
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 experienced a slight decline that was just under 15 %. It was different with country
B
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 in which it reduced by a quarter. When it comes to online classes, they underwent a considerable increase in three
nations
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 which were 5%, 24 % and 6 % respectively.
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 phenomenon
also
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 takes place in abroad
class
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 where nation
B
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 went up slightly at 3 %. Meanwhile, country A dropped moderately from a quarter to one in twenty-three. Different from others, country
B
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 remained stable, which was a fifth of students joining
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 kind of
class
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words nations, class, b with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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