The most important function of music is that it helps people to reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The primary aim of music to humanity is to curtail

anxiety

.  In my opinion, despite the soothing nature of melody to anxious individual, I totally disagree as

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effects is temporary and believe that stress reduction can only be achieved by preventing or removal of stressors through

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lifestyle and seeking

for

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help when

need

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be.                                     Melodies

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being

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part of distraction therapy in medicine but it has a minimal outcome when it

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to

anxiety

reduction and prevention. 

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of pressure is an automatic way our body

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to happenings within our environment. Stressors can be from our job, families,  growth and development, in every stage of our lives we encounter different tensions.  In as much as it's part of us many

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for solo

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ways to reduce

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build

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,

however

, it can only be for

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but engaging in healthy living and diet modification can create a

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decrease in one's

anxiety

level.

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of failure, the individual 's positive

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can help to make him get

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to start all over again.

On the other hand

, music can only take his mind off the problem immediately.

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a therapist is highly recommended for some persons with higher

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of

anxiety

, some need medical care,

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when it is not gotten can be detrimental to

such

person

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and those around them. Take

for example

,a known artist Bobby committed suicide after suffering from depression without being noticed as his song "

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worry

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of encouragement to many not

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impact

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to

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the author, had it been

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sourced

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a

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medical aid ,would still be alive not terminating his

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. In conclusion,

while

it is said that songs can be relaxing and

calming

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the nerves, I maintain that successful reduction of stressors is by living a healthy lifestyle and seeking appropriate therapy.