The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs illustrate road access to
city
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hospitals between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, clearly, there are many changes for people in 2010. It is possible to identify significant features which are presented on the maps.
Firstly
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, in the year 2007, there is only one place to park for both the public and staff which was located on the south side of the Hospital
city
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.
Whereas
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in 2010, there are two parking spaces for each one of them which were placed in the south and east.
According to
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the first map, the bus stop was outside the
City
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Hospital until 2010 it altered to the west side of the map. There are several comparisons that can be made relating to the data. It is surprising that there are two roundabouts that connect the
city
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road to the hospital road.
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, in the same year, the bus station had increased in size.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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