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Some young people like to copy the behavior and clothes of famous people today Why might this be the case What problem can this cause

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It seems argued that most
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 provide their children with everything they desire and
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 grant them the liberty to carry out decisions without supervising them.
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 is not an appropriate method of upbringing as it can result in overdependence and other menaces. One commonly cited benefit of buying children everything they so desire is that it raises their self-esteem ,especially for kids who suffer bullying from peers and whose self-confidence has been shattered through peer pressure.
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, in a study carried out amongst teenagers in a correctional institute in Lagos, Nigeria, it was found that 90% of adolescents who suffer
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 self-esteem were able to boost their confidence after showering them with gifts and giving them autonomy to perform various activities.
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, most
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 allow their kids to do whatever they want so that their kids can feel loved and trusted as most youngsters these days believe that denial of their freedom is a lack of trust from their
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. So most
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 overindulge their wards as means of expressing their heartfelt love towards them.
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, lavishing youngsters with luxuries and giving them undue permission can make them become over-dependent on their
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 as they would not be able to purchase basic necessities for themselves especially when they are mature to do so and are no longer under their parent's tutelage.
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, a child who is used to receiving expensive from his
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 might not be able to fend for himself after the demise of
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, if a child is not getting the luxury he is accustomed to, he may engage in dubious activities
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 as stealing, prostitution or gambling in order to meet up with his previous lifestyle. In conclusion, I believe providing children with everything they need has
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 benefits.
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 can make young individuals rely on their
parents
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 excessively and engage in shady activities when their desires are not met.
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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