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Some people say that nowadays children have an easy life, and some people think that the life of children was easier in the past. Discuss both points of view and also provide relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 it is widely believed that the aim of
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university
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education
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 is to help graduates get better jobs, others believe there are much wider benefits of
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university
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a university
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education
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 for both individuals and society. In my opinion, both have their own advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it is argued that the aim of
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education
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 is to help graduates get better jobs .
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, the main reason is that when studying at
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,
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 will have the opportunity to choose a major and be exposed to the expertise of their chosen industry, so when they graduate, they have enough knowledge and expertise to get a good job. It is
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 possible to say that they are well-trained as
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 until graduation, and their degrees will be valid for applying for jobs. Another reason is based on the degree that shows the student's
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 level, employers will rely on that to train human resources for their company or business.
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, it is strongly believed by others that there are much wider benefits of
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education
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 for both individuals and society. People often have
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 opinion because at
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 there are many movements that give
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 the opportunity to participate in social activities, there are clubs that teach
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 about life skills, outside
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, the
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 organizes activities for volunteers. A second point is that
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 themselves, when participating in those activities, will have more social knowledge and practical experience,
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 to
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 needing for themselves life skills and social experiences. In conclusion
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 going to
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 to have
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 and expertise,
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 have social knowledge is
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 very important, helping themselves
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 and society in general. Personally, I tend to believe that when they find a balance between the two, they will be more stable when going out into the big world.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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