The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

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producing

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process

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for making

sugar

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from

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cane. Let’s start the essay with

growing

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the growing

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process

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of

sugar

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cane. It

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actually, takes at least 12 months to 18 months. And

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it needs to have

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a process

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of harvesting.

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,

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of harvesting has two types.

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of them is

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by

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the help of

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or technology, second of them is doing it by

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. And the next

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called

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crushing and it

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also

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done by machine as I said you.

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, that machine makes juice out of

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cane. And

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, the Limestone filter makes it pure.

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, the Evaporator makes the juice into syrup. And it is before the final stage and it is called

Centrifruge

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which separates

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crystals from syrup. And

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final

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stage is drying and cooling the

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. I hope

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you understood how to manufacture the

sugar

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.