Your pen friend has written you a letter asking for advice on how to improve his/her eating habits and get fit. Write a letter offering advice.

Dear Dinara, Thanks very much for your letter, and of course

Iʼm

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I am

only too glad to help. Here are

few

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a few

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things you can try to improve your eating habits and get fit.

Firstly

, I think you should try not to eat so much junk food, sweets, meat and

also

bread. If I were you, I would eat less bread daily.

As a result

, your body wonʼt store so much sugar and fat. Another good idea

that

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you shouldnʼt go everywhere

by

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in

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your car. Walk to work

everyday

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every day

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.

This

will actually help you. After

that

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you soon get in shape and feel fitter. I hope my advice helps.

Donʼt

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Don't

worry

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worries

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if you havenʼt a result immediately. Let me know what happens. Best wishes, Kholida.