In some countries, the number of people who visit art galleries are declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

There is no doubt that

tourism

is

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of income for many countries. Recently, many nations rely on

tourism

as

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main

nation

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income source.

Althought

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tourism

result in many

advantage

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there is many drawbacks

that

is

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serious to take

in

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consideration. On one side, One of the key and foremost advantages of

tourism

is increasing the

nation

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income .

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, many countries like

turkey

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rely more than 40% of

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nation

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economy on

tourism

people

all around come to Istanbul to enjoy the view and nature.

Moreover

, food and sweets are popular in Istanbul that have huge

varies

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of options

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matchs

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different

favor

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of

people

.

Secondly

,

tourism

creates many jobs for local

people

.

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, many teenagers work

in

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there

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summer vacation to help aid their family in

part time

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job

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which

last

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for

short

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period

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.

Finally

,

Tourism

wide the vision and horizon for local

people

.

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, many local

citizen

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learn new languages , cultures , and cosmetics ,

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connection with

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individual

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across the world. Despite the advantages mentioned early, One

of

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critical

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drawback of

tourism

is that it

affect

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the

nation

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national

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security of countries

due to

huge

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number of tourist in an area many crime may take place if security is not managed in

right

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way. Another serious concern,

that

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make

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people

may come to the country and stay in an authorized stay

result

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resulting

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in increasing the number of homeless in cities. On balance,

although

it might

seen

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that there

is

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many cons

but

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the pros of

tourism

outrace the cons special

in

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government

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has

ultimate

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plan to manage the number

visitors

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of visitors

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