Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

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It is argued that
people
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like to live in another
country
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which is why they have to use a second
language
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in that
country
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. Most
people
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think that it will cause social alone with personal
problems
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. I agree with the statement. There are a number of reasons why I believe if
people
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live
other
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in other
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countries,
it
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they
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will have various types of
problems
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. One possible reason is that a person will forget his/ her native
language
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because they have to communicate all the time in a foreign
language
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such
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as
schools
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in schools
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, universities,
works
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work
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and so on .
As a result
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, individuals will like to talk and will feel comfortable using another
language
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. Another reason is that
people
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will adopt
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another culture and will not follow their
country
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's culture.
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, my friend Hiya went to America for her graduation and she wore
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dresses
as well as
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celebrated
western
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culture
such
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as Christmas, Happy new year etc.
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, she never
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did
her
country
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's programmes and traditions. It will greatly hamper
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country's
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the country's
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existence and rules.
In addition
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,
people
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can no
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cannot
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meet their family
member
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members
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due to
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long
distance
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distances
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.
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, they badly miss their family which is why they will
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mental issues like sadness,
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, depression etc.
On the other hand
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, they have to work their house and outside because they have to do
part time
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part-time
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job
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jobs
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to fulfil their basic needs and they do not have anyone in that
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to help them
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with
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their household
works
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work
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.
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the state will
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lack
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a lack
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of
intelligence
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people
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as most students go to other countries for their
educations
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education
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,
works
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work
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and other things and
then
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country
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the country
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will
face
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the problem of a lack of
an
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educated person. To illustrate, The Daily Star newspaper published that every year 46% of students move to Australia, America and other countries from Bangalore because of their education and other facilities.
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, Bangladesh has
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lack of literacy
people
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In conclusion, considering the factors discussed. If
people
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move to another
country
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and use another
language
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the
country
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will have cultural,
economical
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and traditional
problems
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and the person will
also
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face
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personal
problems
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as
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such as
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family distance, workload and so on.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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