Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?
It is argued that the state will
people
like to live in another country
which is why they have to use a second language
in that country
. Most people
think that it will cause social alone with personal problems
. I agree with the statement.
There are a number of reasons why I believe if people
live other
countries,Change preposition
in other
it
will have various types of Correct pronoun usage
they
problems
. One possible reason is that a person will forget his/ her native language
because they have to communicate all the time in a foreign language
such
as schools
, universities,Change preposition
in schools
works
and so on . Fix the agreement mistake
work
As a result
, individuals will like to talk and will feel comfortable using another language
. Another reason is that people
will adopt with
another culture and will not follow their Change preposition
apply
country
's culture. For example
, my friend Hiya went to America for her graduation and she wore western
dresses Correct your spelling
Western
as well as
celebrated western
culture Correct your spelling
Western
such
as Christmas, Happy new year etc. Therefore
, she never didil
her Correct your spelling
did
country
's programmes and traditions. It will greatly hamper country's
existence and rules.
Correct article usage
the country's
In addition
, people
can no
meet their family Correct your spelling
cannot
member
Fix the agreement mistake
members
due to
long distance
. Fix the agreement mistake
distances
Hence
, they badly miss their family which is why they will face
mental issues like sadness, cry
, depression etc. Wrong verb form
crying
On the other hand
, they have to work their house and outside because they have to do part time
Add a hyphen
part-time
job
to fulfil their basic needs and they do not have anyone in that Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
country
to help them in
their household Change preposition
with
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
Finally
Add a comma
,
face
lack
of Correct article usage
a lack
intelligence
Replace the word
intelligent
people
as most students go to other countries for their educations
, Fix the agreement mistake
education
works
and other things and Fix the agreement mistake
work
then
country
will Add an article
the country
face
the problem of a lack of an
educated person. To illustrate, The Daily Star newspaper published that every year 46% of students move to Australia, America and other countries from Bangalore because of their education and other facilities. Correct article usage
apply
As a consequence
, Bangladesh has the
lack of literacy Correct article usage
a
people
In conclusion, considering the factors discussed. If people
move to another country
and use another language
the country
will have cultural, economical
and traditional Replace the word
economic
problems
and the person will also
face
personal problems
as
family distance, workload and so on.Correct quantifier usage
such as
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