Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

It is argued that
people
like to live in another
country
which is why they have to use a second
language
in that
country
. Most
people
think that it will cause social alone with personal
problems
. I agree with the statement. There are a number of reasons why I believe if
people
live
other
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countries,
it
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they
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will have various types of
problems
. One possible reason is that a person will forget his/ her native
language
because they have to communicate all the time in a foreign
language
such
as
schools
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in schools
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, universities,
works
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work
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and so on .
As a result
, individuals will like to talk and will feel comfortable using another
language
. Another reason is that
people
will adopt
with
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another culture and will not follow their
country
's culture.
For example
, my friend Hiya went to America for her graduation and she wore
western
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dresses
as well as
celebrated
western
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culture
such
as Christmas, Happy new year etc.
Therefore
, she never
didil
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did
her
country
's programmes and traditions. It will greatly hamper
country's
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the country's
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existence and rules.
In addition
,
people
can no
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cannot
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meet their family
member
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members
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due to
long
distance
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distances
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.
Hence
, they badly miss their family which is why they will
face
mental issues like sadness,
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crying
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, depression etc.
On the other hand
, they have to work their house and outside because they have to do
part time
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job
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jobs
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to fulfil their basic needs and they do not have anyone in that
country
to help them
in
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with
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their household
works
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work
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.
Finally
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the state will
face
lack
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a lack
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of
intelligence
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people
as most students go to other countries for their
educations
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education
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,
works
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work
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and other things and
then
country
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the country
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will
face
the problem of a lack of
an
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educated person. To illustrate, The Daily Star newspaper published that every year 46% of students move to Australia, America and other countries from Bangalore because of their education and other facilities.
As a consequence
, Bangladesh has
the
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lack of literacy
people
In conclusion, considering the factors discussed. If
people
move to another
country
and use another
language
the
country
will have cultural,
economical
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and traditional
problems
and the person will
also
face
personal
problems
as
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such as
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family distance, workload and so on.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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