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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction
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the computerazition
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computerization
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by using
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 range of technological facilities,some people
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presume
 that all challenges which human
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can be solved
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extremely easily
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 of which can collect ,
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human
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humans
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donot
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do not
 require to think and their ability of deeming has been weakening.
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the opponent of them
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 that for
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philosophy
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practical
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 of which may be highlighted by manpower so mechanization could not be responsible for all human
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 which is not superficial
Conclusion
In conclusion,that technology plays
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an indispensible
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indispensable
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nowadays
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 basis human thoughts are
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Over-reliance
  • Cognitive capabilities
  • Critical thinking
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Diminish
  • Augment
  • Natural sense of direction
  • Access to information
  • Cognitive development
  • Education reforms
  • Technological advancement
  • Nuanced position
  • Recapitulate
  • Affirm
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