The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram illustrates the lifecycle of
plastic
bottles
from the recycling stage to the final product resulting from raw materials.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that the final product endures a detailed process commencing from collecting the plastic
bottles
from the household to transforming them into raw materials used for plastic
merchandise.
Glancing at the diagram reveals that, the first two stages of the process are collecting the plastic
bottles
from the garbages, and then
, transporting them to the recycling centre where the operation of sorting starts to separate the useful from the useless bottles
. Following
this
, these useful bottles
are compressed into blocks and crushed then
washed from the impurities. Subsequently
, two last
stages prior to the final product, the clean
Correct your spelling
clear
plastic
is converted into plastic
pellets, then
heated pellets. Finally
, raw materials are used to produce various products such
as pens, clothes and new plastic
bottles
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