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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the average maximum and minimum temperatures in degree Celsius on a daily basis in
Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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. The chart
further
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 provides data about the average number of
days
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 with
rainfall
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 from January to
December
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 in
Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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.
Overall
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, it can be derived from the data that
Canberra
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 is a colder city and has more fluctuations in its temperature throughout the year with its average
rainfall
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 going up only from June to October.
However
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,
Brisbane
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 being the hotter city
also
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 experiences more
rainfall
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 during most of the months of the year than
Canberra
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. The first chart shows that
Brisbane
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 and
Canberra
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 are equally hot during January and
December
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 with the temperature ranging around 26-30 degrees Celsius. As it starts to cool down from January to May, June to August are the coldest months with a range of 0 to 12 degrees and about 12-20 degrees in
Canberra
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 and
Brisbane
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, respectively. From
then
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 on, the temperatures start to rise till
December
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, in both cities. In the second chart, the highest amount of
rainfall
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 received is in February and March with an average of 14
days
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.
Furthermore
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, it goes down to approximately 7
days
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 before rising again in
December
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.
In contrast
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, the maximum
rainfall
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 that
Canberra
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 receives is from June to August, which is about 10
days
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.
Otherwise
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, it is always less than 8
days
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 during the rest of the months in
Canberra
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brisbane, canberra, days, rainfall, december with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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