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You have been have problems concerning your neighbour's trash lately. Write a letter to the city enviromental officer. In you letter derscribe the situation, explain how this problem is affecting you, suggest how the officer could help you with the problem.

#neighbour #trash #city #officer #derscribe #situation
Dear Sir or Madam My name is Hera,
the
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 resident of
this
 city. I am writing regarding an issue with trash problem near my
house
. Nowadays, my neighbours through trashes next to my
house
 which is a small empty place
of
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corner
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the corner
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. At
first,
only
few
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people
 did that, but
time
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 goes by more residents
strat
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start
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 to think there is a garbage point. I cause many uncomfortable
to
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 me and my family members.
Firstly
 it has
terrible
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 smell near the corner
especially
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 in
summer
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 season. We experience
difficult
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 time with it.
Second,
it
destrois
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destroys
 the
qulity
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quality
 of my
house
. It looks like my place is next to the big trashcan.
People
 dislike to
come
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 my
house
 and so do my family. I need your help to fix the problem. I request you to make
big
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a big
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 sign
of
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prohibiden
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prohibited
prohibition
 trash in the corner to let
people
 notice.
Also
, I need CCTV to check the
people
 who
through out
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throughout
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 the trash illegally. I understand you are busy with many
requsts
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requests
 in the city. We are hoping to get a positive answer from you and solve the problem soon. Yours faithfully, Hera.
Submitted by Hera on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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