The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of

Brandfield.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.
From the map, we can see two possible spots for a shopping mall in Brandfield. There are two potential spots, S1 and S2. To start with, S1 is located in the north
side
of
city
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the city
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centre,
while
S2 is located in
south
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the south
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. First of all, I can tell you about
S1
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the S1
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location.
River
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The river
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is
right
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the right
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side
of it and on the left
side
, there is a housing
estate
.
Also
, on the west of S1, there is a road and on the south, there is a railway. On the east of S1, there is
a
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empty space.
On the other hand
,
S2
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in S2
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,
on
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the
north-east
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northeast
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, there is
a
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an
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industrial
estate
and
on
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in
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the
north-west
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northwest
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, there is a city centre. The railway is on the right
side
and the road is on the left
side
of S2. Compare with S1 and S2, there are similarities.
First,
there is
a
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empty place near them, respectively on the right
side
of S1 and on the left
side
of S2.
Also
, the railway and the road are surrounded
of
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them. But the differentiation between them is that S1 is near the housing
estate
,
on the other hand
, S2 is near the industrial
estate
.
Overall
, there are some
differenciations
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differentiations
differentiation
and similarities
on
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between
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S1 and S2.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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