The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
From the map, we can see two possible spots for a shopping mall in Brandfield. There are two potential spots, S1 and S2.
To start with, S1 is located in the north
side
of city
centre, Add an article
the city
while
S2 is located in south
. First of all, I can tell you about Add an article
the south
S1
location. Correct article usage
the S1
River
is Add an article
The river
right
Add an article
the right
side
of it and on the left side
, there is a housing estate
. Also
, on the west of S1, there is a road and on the south, there is a railway. On the east of S1, there is a
empty space. Change the article
an
On the other hand
, S2
, Change preposition
in S2
on
the Change preposition
in
north-east
, there is Correct your spelling
northeast
a
industrial Change the article
an
estate
and on
the Change preposition
in
north-west
, there is a city centre. The railway is on the right Correct your spelling
northwest
side
and the road is on the left side
of S2.
Compare with S1 and S2, there are similarities. First,
there is a
empty place near them, respectively on the right Change the article
an
side
of S1 and on the left side
of S2. Also
, the railway and the road are surrounded of
them. But the differentiation between them is that S1 is near the housing Change preposition
by
estate
, on the other hand
, S2 is near the industrial estate
.
Overall
, there are some differenciations
and similarities Correct your spelling
differentiations
differentiation
on
S1 and S2.Change preposition
between
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