Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skill such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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as dressmaking, cookery and woodwork from families and

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of training those at school

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because

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should be better to concentrate on students' academic education and evaluation. I do not agree with

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approach.

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are the place where pupils spend most of their

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, these folks,

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, have fresh minds and are able to learn several things quickly.

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situation makes several available times in order to provide a high training for those people. Academic success and passing the exams play a vital role in their career prospects,

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, they need to live independently in the year forwards, especially during their studying at the university or working stage. Using expert trainers in

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to teach some prominent

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, leads to them improving their ability, and getting the suitable certification, which they apply as a professional resume.

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plan.

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, in the modern era, a wide variety of family members get involved in their daily work, and they do have not enough

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to spend

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for teaching them some practical

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, even most of the

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they do have not appropriate knowledge about those

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, their

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are more likely to be unaware of those sensible

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, so, they are unable to convey any abilities to them.

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, I do not agree with learning those

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from families and

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. In conclusion,

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would be able to make a suitable and stimulating environment for students to learn beneficial

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among focusing on their education and examination

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the fact that they have sufficient

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, and families and their

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could not teach them the

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because of

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limitations and lack of knowledge.