The product you ordered through online shopping has been delivered but has some problems. You are writing a letter to the seller to complain. In your letter • Describe the details of the problem • What do you want the seller to do • What will you do if they do nothing Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear Madam or Sir, I'm writing to report about some issues with a smartphone that I purchased from your online shop
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week. Actually, I have been supplying all my needs from your online store for five years. I was very satisfied with my previous purchases until my
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purchase. The smartphone that I bought from your online shop
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month has some issues. Its touch screen is defective.
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, I ordered red, but the product I received is white. There is a price difference between the two products. The red smartphone is more expensive. Unfortunately, I did not get a positive result from my previous conversations with your sales representative.
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situation made me very sad. As I am exceedingly dissatisfied with
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trade, I would like to request a refund for
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purchase. I expect that you take appropriate action;
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, I will have to inform Consumer Protection so they can resolve
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problem. Thank you in advance for your time and consideration. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Sinan Y
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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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