Some people encourage watching sports as a way of learning about teamwork and strategy, while others believe that one can learn these skills only through playing sports. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people believed that the method of gaining knowledge about how the team works and their strategy is through watching sports matches on television.
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some people
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idea as these skills can be learned only when they are applied in actual games. In my opinion, whilst observing the overview of the sports
game
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is essential in the planning stage,
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, I
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believe that the application of techniques and strategies
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crucial to some extent. On the one hand, it is an evident merit that watching matches on tv proves the importance
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relaying the whole plan picture of a
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is mainly
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the advance of modern technology
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has become easier to film a match
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from different corners which is crucial
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every player to study the movements of their opponents with the ability to pause, rewind and forward the recorded videos.
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, in a basketball tournament, part of the preparation of players before the actual
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is to study the opponents’ style through watching
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of their games as they say that the best players don’t just work hard on the physical aspect of the
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, but they
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work to create a mental
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plan.
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, involvement
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actual physical activities or playing the actual
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is
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considered important in developing skills of strategies and approaches.
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, coaches or team leaders should be able to identify the variations
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the applied plan
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that may affect the result of
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.
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, there might be
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issues
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with the court dimensions and the speed of the individual player etc.
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, it is more
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to learn these skills by often playing the actual games for it would augment the physical well-being of players which would ultimately contribute
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success
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the team and among athletes. In conclusion, as both methods have significant contributions to the success of teamwork and playing with great planning,
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,
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cannot be neglected, and it should be applied at the same time.
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