Your friend has a problem at work. He has written to you a letter and asked for advice about the ways to solve it. Write to him. In your letter: • Tell him that you understand the problem; • Tell about similar case that you experienced in the past; • Suggest possible ways to solve the problem. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ....,

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Dear Mehmet, I hope you are well. It was so nice to hear from you after

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a long time. I have noticed that you are seeking some advice for some technical issues that you are currently facing. I had a similar sort of issue when I was working at your division; working through the VPN causes trouble more often. So, I understand what you are going through right now. I got stuck at times when I was transferring base station traffic from one node to another. It is quite hard to explain how I felt on those occasions. I had to work overnight because of

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issue that we have in our network. Luckily, I found a solution for

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issue after a few months of experiments. I changed my dongle to an XPN brand. It worked smoothly, and there were no disconnections.

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how I ended my nightmare. I hope it will work for you as well. If you need

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information, please feel free to call me at my mobile number. Best wishes, Sinan Y

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

179 words

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