Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your option.

Water

is an essential-needed for

human

Fix the agreement mistake

humans

show examples

,

animal

Fix the agreement mistake

animals

show examples

and

also

with the environment.

However

, freshwater is rarely to be found since the particular factors

such

as

water

contamination. In

this

essay, both sides of the debate will be explained and in my point of view, freshwater should be restricted for

using

Change the form of the verb

use

show examples

but it depends on the condition of the country which

have

Change the verb form

has

show examples

the problem of clearwater. To start with, the community around the world wants to

use

freshwater for daily

use

. Meanwhile, in some countries, the environment does not support the condition for the community to

use

freshwater

Correct your spelling

fresh water

show examples

because

Change preposition

of an

show examples

an

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

indication which

make

Change the verb form

makes

show examples

a drawback to clean

water

source

Fix the agreement mistake

sources

show examples

.

For instance

,

water

pollution in

river

Add an article

the river

a river

show examples

as people like to litter the rubbish,

on the other

hand

Add the comma(s)

,hand

show examples

the problem is not only from the community but the

government

interfere with

this

matter

such

as the non-well-prepared infrastructure to recycle the rubbish which led to the rubbish will have the end process to

water

. In fact, freshwater is still available to

use

,

on the contrary

, it is hard to find freshwater as the impact of sewage pollution arises. The

government

should think to anticipate the limited source of

water

,

for instance

, making a technology which

enable

Change the verb form

enables

show examples

water

to be recycled itself and control using freshwater among the communities.

To sum up

, the

government

is supposed to restrict the using freshwater and allocate

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

limited source of freshwater for

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

important events.

Additionally

, the

government

should pay attention to the infrastructure for recycling

water

as it will give merit to the environment.