It is widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together, while others think that more intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss and present your own opinion.

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are categorized into two distinct groups. It is often argued that

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students

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should learn in a separate environment.

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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far

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concerned, I personally feel that learning in a different environment will eventually benefit the much weaker

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but the combination learning will improve the

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student’s guiding skills.

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, it is evident that

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students

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will always look after their classmates during

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times.

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will strengthen their knowledge and

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leadership skills as well.

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scenario actually creates a better opportunity to

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them into a better

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person rather than looking down on the weaker

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system rather than

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them based on their

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level.

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, weaker

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might

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as their role

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in

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by motivating them in order to achieve

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achievement in the future.

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, I personally believe that the

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separation between

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and

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non-

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students

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will allow

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educators to provide more

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those who are needed.

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, It is worth mentioning that Malaysia’s public schools have delegated the

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different classes based on their yearly academic results and

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has actually proven that the needed

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improved gradually as more

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have been given to them and at the same time they won’t feel embarrassed

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asking their doubts in the

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but not least,

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students

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manage to learn more

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in the

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as the educators always

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large

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of information

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a single

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. In conclusion,

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separation will improve the

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’ performance in

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school. In the future, we will certainly see government take greater

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measures

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to improve

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notion in the education field for the well-being of the community.