It is widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together, while others think that more intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss and present your own opinion.

Students
are categorized into two distinct groups. It is often argued that
intelligence
students
should learn in a separate environment.
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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far
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concerned, I personally feel that learning in a different environment will eventually benefit the much weaker
students
but the combination learning will improve the
intelligence
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student’s guiding skills.
Firstly
, it is evident that
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students
will always look after their classmates during
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times.
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will strengthen their knowledge and
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leadership skills as well.
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scenario actually creates a better opportunity to
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them into a better
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person rather than looking down on the weaker
students
.
For instance
, kindergartens in Malaysia
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a
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class
system rather than
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classifying
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them based on their
intelligence
level.
Secondly
, weaker
students
might
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intelligence
students
as their role
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in
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by motivating them in order to achieve
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achievement in the future.
However
, I personally believe that the
class
separation between
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and
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non-
intelligence
students
will allow
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educators to provide more
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those who are needed.
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students
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different classes based on their yearly academic results and
this
has actually proven that the needed
students
improved gradually as more
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have been given to them and at the same time they won’t feel embarrassed
while
asking their doubts in the
class
.
Last
but not least,
intelligence
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students
manage to learn more
knowledges
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in the
class
as the educators always
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large
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of information
at
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a single
class
. In conclusion,
according to
the examples and arguments given, I personally believe that
class
separation will improve the
overall
students
’ performance in
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school. In the future, we will certainly see government take greater
measure
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to improve
this
notion in the education field for the well-being of the community.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inclusive environment
  • diverse perspectives
  • lower-level students
  • higher-level peers
  • challenged
  • progress
  • academic and personal development
  • empathy
  • teamwork
  • real-world settings
  • tailored educational approaches
  • boredom
  • frustration
  • classroom management
  • homogeneous classes
  • core subjects
  • specialized subjects
  • advanced classes
  • intelligence levels
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