It is widely believed that children of different levels of intelligence should be taught together, while others think that more intelligent children should be taught separately. Discuss and present your own opinion.

Students

are categorized into two distinct groups. It is often argued that

intelligence

students

should learn in a separate environment.

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as to whether it is a blessing or curse, there arises a heated debate among people. As far

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concerned, I personally feel that learning in a different environment will eventually benefit the much weaker

students

but the combination learning will improve the

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student’s guiding skills.

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, it is evident that

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students

will always look after their classmates during

difficulty

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times.

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will strengthen their knowledge and

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leadership skills as well.

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scenario actually creates a better opportunity to

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them into a better

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person rather than looking down on the weaker

students

.

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, kindergartens in Malaysia

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a

single

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class

system rather than

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them based on their

intelligence

level.

Secondly

, weaker

students

might

considered

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intelligence

students

as their role

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in

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by motivating them in order to achieve

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achievement in the future.

However

, I personally believe that the

class

separation between

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and

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non-

intelligence

students

will allow

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educators to provide more

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on

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those who are needed.

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, It is worth mentioning that Malaysia’s public schools have delegated the

students

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different classes based on their yearly academic results and

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has actually proven that the needed

students

improved gradually as more

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have been given to them and at the same time they won’t feel embarrassed

while

asking their doubts in the

class

.

Last

but not least,

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students

manage to learn more

knowledges

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in the

class

as the educators always

delivery

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large

amount

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of information

at

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a single

class

. In conclusion,

according to

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class

separation will improve the

overall

students

’ performance in

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school. In the future, we will certainly see government take greater

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measures

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to improve

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notion in the education field for the well-being of the community.