You ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing. Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to complain about the appalling service received by me from your bank.
I am one of the account holders at the South Branch in Toronto and have been availing the services since 2014. I visited your branch two weeks ago when I applied for the chequebook in person; however
, I did not receive any information regarding this
. After a week, I called the bank and one of your staff members told me that there was no request made at
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on
online
platform. I requested him to apply for the same Correct article usage
the online
then
he assisted me to apply
for it from my online mobile application which informed Change preposition
in applying
that
within three working Correct pronoun usage
me that
days
it Add a comma
days,
will deliver
to my address. I do not get Wrong verb form
would be delivered
this
chequebook yet.
In relation to this
, I would like to ask the processing time it will get to be delivered at my residence. I request you to intervene into
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in
this
matter, for I need this
chequebook to pay the fees of my child in the upcoming week; otherwise
, I have to pay fine
for the Add an article
a fine
the fine
delay
deposition of the fees.
I am expecting a prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Amandeep KaurReplace the word
delayed
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The tone of the letter is appropriate and polite, suitable for a formal complaint.
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The greeting and closing are correctly formatted for a formal letter.