IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 2.5

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from the home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase the recycling is for Governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #waste #home #governments #requirement
Recycling is crucial for continuing the scenery nowadays. Most part of the land is polluted
due to
 the shortage
processes
Change preposition
of processes
show examples
 in recycling. Mobile opinions are you dad government should play a part in
Add an article
the
show examples
cycling of the objects. I completely agree, the administrations should provide opportunities to society for the processing of the object
as well as
 implement some laws. To commence with, most people in society reuse things with their own resources and earn money. But
due to
 enough ,economy they do not able to recycle things on an industrial scale. Some other products that are not recycled properly lead to chronic and acute diseases and have a detrimental effect on biodiversity
as well as
, on the environment.
On the other hand
, Governments should take steps for recycling and provide the latest equipment which is effective.
Furthermore
, banned plastic bags and introduced homemade bags to every family in society that are easy to reuse. To add on, the administration, keep the workers and
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
employer
who
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
give
Change the verb form
gives
show examples
detail about recycling on a daily basis.
To conclude
, govt should be engaged in social work
as well as
 take steps to reduce the pollution caused by the non-renewable products
Submitted by aqsagoraya9 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: