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Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree what is your opinion? Give reason for your answer and include example form your own experience.

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Nowadays,
News
 has been a reliable source of
information
 and knowledge. Some
people
 think that
news
 and media are affecting our lives in a positive way
while
 others disagree. I strongly agree with
this
 phenomenon and in the following ,paragraphs I will explain these arguments
further
.
Firstly
, the world is changing very quickly, so it is crucial to keep ourselves updated with the latest development.
Also
, the
news
 is providing
information
, knowledge and what is happening all around the world.
For instance
,
last
 few days there was a series-killer in Thailand that used chemicals to kill
people
.
this
 topic can give us knowledge about the dangerous chemical and live our lives safely.
On the other hand
, there is much fake
news
 as well, which is always posted on the internet in order to make us misunderstand and gain their engagement on social media.
For example
, there was a
news
 about gingers can protect us from COVID-19
that is
 no scientific evidence to prove that. So
people
 have to read that
news
 very carefully as well.
However
, the
news
 is important for
people
 to live their life in the world. It is very easy to update the
news
 every time. There are many ways to have
information
such
 as TVs, radios or events on the smartphone. In order to have correct
information
people
 must have
this
information
 from the trusted source
such
 as
news
 channels. In conclusion, I could not agree more with
people
 who argue that
news
 and media are affecting our lives in a positive way and make our life easier.
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