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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development? You should write at least 250 words.

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individuals
 have stopped reading newsletters or
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 tv
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 programmes .
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instead
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 they get in touch with the latest global
news
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 via the
internet
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 , I personally think that
this
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 is a positive development because the
internet
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 has lots of different sources of
news
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 and is easier to
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access
. First ,the
internet
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 has various sources of
news
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 , you can simply read any type of
news
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 you want , all major
news
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 companies today have
there
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their
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 own websites or apps which can be
accesable
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accessible
 by all
internet
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counsumers
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counsellors
 for free ,
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, my friend Ali wants to read about both the British and American political
sitution
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situation
, via the
internet
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 he can read both the Times and The Sun , two different newsletters from
oppiste
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opposite
 parts of the world .
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Second
,
news
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 on the
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internet
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Internet
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 is
more easy
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easier
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 to
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access
,
usally
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usually
 physical copies of newspapers have to get delivered each
moring
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morning
 or bought
form
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from
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 local shops and cost money for
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a subscribtion
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subscribtion
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subscription
 in some cases ,
whereas
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 ,
news
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 on the
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internet
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Internet
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 can be
acssesed
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accessed
 instantly for your smart device , a good example is
news
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that is
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 sent on the
counsumers
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consumers
 email each morning , it is
consistant
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consistent
, free and
conveniant
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convenient
 for everyone
wether
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whether
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your
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you're
you are
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 a worker a busy housewife or just too lazy to go buy the daily
news
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 from your local store . To sum things up , getting
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daliy
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daily
 world updates
throught
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through
throughout
 the
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 should be seen as a positive development , as it offers
variety
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a variety
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in
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of
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news
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along with
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 instant
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access
 between your hands .
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