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What is your opinion in the use of speed limits on vehicles to prevent accidents and other methods.

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Road traffic
accidents
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 are very common which are the result of overspeeding automobiles. limiting the speed makes a lot of difference in the occurrence of danger to human life. my opinion is in favour of variable ways which are substantiated in the paragraph below. In our highly populous country like India, there are people who are in a rat race and
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 the ambitious who are in a hurry to reach their goals in their daily life by reaching offices and destinations early. Few people who are not time cautious start at nearly end time to the workplace and ride at a high speed so as to be on time.
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 leads to a calamity of emergency to life.
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,speed acts as a catalyst for the
accidents
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 on road.
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, there are high rates of
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 happening where
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 no speed maintenance in the area of Telangana and many of
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 things happening in other areas too. Government should implement awareness in individuals regarding the hazardous effects of speed and the damage caused to
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living being.
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, the harm may be prevented paving the way for betterment. Sensors should be installed to monitor the momentum and range.
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, motors racing should be given a penalty
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 crossing the valid limits.
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, in countries like Saudi
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, it is a huge amount of punishing amount on the accused.
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 makes the citizens alarmed and
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.
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, putting a stop to the casualties.
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, the above rules
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 been good agenda to follow. To summarise, in my opinion, there are various measures for the downfall of
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 by making good laws in traffic management and by awareness in the people for their health and prosperity.
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