In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year or two between finishing high school and starting university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
It has been noted that some nations
advice
their youngsters to get a job or Replace the word
advise
travel
for one year between finishing secondary Use synonyms
school
and going into higher Use synonyms
institution
. I discuss Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
further
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on
the cons and pros of Change preposition
apply
this
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,
and give a logical conclusion.
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To begin
with. There are so many advantages associated with Linking Words
this
trend, ranging from gaining Linking Words
travel
experience to making young people work and Use synonyms
add
extra cash to their pockets. They Wrong verb form
adding
also
gain Linking Words
working
experience and as well acquire professional skills. Replace the word
work
For instance
, people from poor family backgrounds, on completing secondary Linking Words
education
, can choose to learn hand work which helps them to earn money and provide financial support to their families. Some might go as far as sponsoring themselves when they eventually gain admission Use synonyms
in
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to
tertiary
institution.
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a tertiary
the tertiary
On the other hand
, there are downsides to Linking Words
this
. Given that teenagers easily succumb to peer pressure, some of them easily get distracted when they see their mates working and earning handsomely, they would Linking Words
wand
to be like them and thereby Correct your spelling
want
giving
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education
entirely. More so, when some youngsters conclude Use synonyms
their
high Correct pronoun usage
apply
school
, if found idle within Use synonyms
this
transition period between high Linking Words
school
and university, might get corrupt with bad friends thereby Use synonyms
loosing
focus. Replace the word
losing
For instance
just like the popular saying that an idle mind is a devil’s workshop. When young people fail to engage Linking Words
into
something meaningful Change preposition
in
such
as getting a job or acquiring skills, they tend to be easily distracted Linking Words
with
bad Change preposition
by
behaviors
, some become drug addicts and criminals when they are not being guided. Change the spelling
behaviours
Consequently
given up on Linking Words
education
.
In conclusion, in as much as there Use synonyms
advantages
to taking a year off to work or Add a missing verb
are advantages
travel
after secondary Use synonyms
school
, before starting Use synonyms
university
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a university
education
Use synonyms
such
as getting a job and earning money to be independent, gaining Linking Words
travel
experience and so on. Teenagers tend to Use synonyms
loose
interest in Replace the word
lose
education
within Use synonyms
this
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