In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year or two between finishing high school and starting university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

It has been noted that some nations

advice

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their youngsters to get a job or

travel

for one year between finishing secondary

school

and going into higher

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. I discuss

further

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the cons and pros of

this

,

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and give a logical conclusion.

To begin

with. There are so many advantages associated with

this

trend, ranging from gaining

travel

experience to making young people work and

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extra cash to their pockets. They

also

gain

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experience and as well acquire professional skills.

For instance

, people from poor family backgrounds, on completing secondary

education

, can choose to learn hand work which helps them to earn money and provide financial support to their families. Some might go as far as sponsoring themselves when they eventually gain admission

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tertiary

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institution.

On the other hand

, there are downsides to

this

. Given that teenagers easily succumb to peer pressure, some of them easily get distracted when they see their mates working and earning handsomely, they would

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to be like them and thereby

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up on

education

entirely. More so, when some youngsters conclude

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high

school

, if found idle within

this

transition period between high

school

and university, might get corrupt with bad friends thereby

loosing

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focus.

For instance

just like the popular saying that an idle mind is a devil’s workshop. When young people fail to engage

into

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something meaningful

such

as getting a job or acquiring skills, they tend to be easily distracted

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bad

behaviors

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, some become drug addicts and criminals when they are not being guided.

Consequently

given up on

education

. In conclusion, in as much as there

advantages

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to taking a year off to work or

travel

after secondary

school

, before starting

university

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education

such

as getting a job and earning money to be independent, gaining

travel

experience and so on. Teenagers tend to

loose

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interest in

education

within

this

short period if not properly guided.