The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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before improving the education system for young people.
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issue immediately
To begin
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individual
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an individual
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Therefore
, political entities have to resolve as much as possible. For instance
, nowadays, many ocupations
are required to have writing and reading skills. Unless people have the abilities, they might be not able to have their ideal jobs.
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occupations
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resources
push
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, he does not know how to improve those
writing and reading skills. That means the political entity is missing a workload for itself.
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To conclude
, citizens who do not have abilities for writing and reading have to be protected by governments because they are in harsh lifes
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lives
In addition
, once those individuals are trained and improve their writing and reading skills, they might improve the economy in the country as the workloads.Submitted by Sunbear on
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