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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have advantages or disadvantages?

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These days, plenty of workers are working too many
hours
 in their fields and they do other activities minimum.
While
this
 situation has many disadvantages and less positive sides because a
person
 has to maintain their professional and personal
work
-
life
 schedule. Working long
hours
 can have multiple disadvantages in that a
person
 can not live his personal
life
.
For instance
, he can not live with family and children because he is busy with
office
work
.
Furthermore
, daily routine can be a reason behind depression
problems
 and mental weakness because too much
work
 can not allow the mind to divert to other leisure activities.
Additionally
, it leads to many physical
problems
.
For example
, too much
office
work
 in front of a laptop screen can harm the eyes
as well as
 a
person
 can face backbone
problems
while
 seating for more than a limited period of time.
Furthermore
,
according to
 a recent survey
office
work
person
 has a majority of obesity
problems
 because they have to
work
 mentally not physically. To keep ourselves fit we have to do some physical activities.
Besides
 the drawbacks, there is one advantage is that a
person
 has a very good chance to get a promotion because he is doing
work
 more than the given times and earning more money and growing his pers ness
as well as
 he has a very good chance to become a successful
person
 in his
life
 with the help of dedication
work
To conclude
, workers should maintain a balanced
life
 in both personal
work
 and family
work
 to live a happy
life
 because sided things side works for anyone. Too many
office
hours
 or family
hours
 can prevent success,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • stress relief
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • career progression
  • skill enhancement
  • quality time
  • financial security
  • leisure activities
  • physical health
  • personal relationships
  • stress-related illnesses
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