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A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of the course you took at the university explain why you recommend the university give some advice about how to apply

#friend #course #university #advice
Dear Amreek, I hope you are doing great! I am writing
this
 letter to you today, to provide you with the expertise which I gained
while
 pursuing the subject at the University. I would recommend you follow the similar ways to follow the course. The course contained an Induction part followed by seven Chapters and each chapter consists of ten lessons.
Moreover
, there will be exercises which the lecturer will help you solve in the classroom.
Also
, they will offer you homework in preparation for the next class.
However
, I would recommend you try and complete maximum exercises in the classroom under the guidance of the teacher. Christ University falls under the bracket of the top ten colleges in the country.
In addition
, the Business course which you will pursue will benefit you in appearing and getting placements in the topmost companies of the country. For applying you can visit the official website of the college, you will find a form under the education option, fill up the form with the asked details and submit it in a similar location from where you downloaded the form. I hope you all the best. See you soon! Warm Regards, Madhur Bathla
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prospective student
  • alma mater
  • curriculum
  • faculty
  • state-of-the-art
  • extramural
  • scholarly pursuits
  • cohort
  • accreditations
  • holistic development
  • pedagogy
  • thesis
  • dissertation
  • prerequisites
  • mentorship
  • application portal
  • tuition fees
  • scholarships
  • financial aid
  • internship opportunities
  • networking events
  • career services
  • personal statement
  • deadline
  • admissions office
  • recommendation letters
  • portfolio
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