You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Jamie, I have got a new job in New Jersey and I moved into my new accommodation

last

week. It is a two-bedroom apartment with an open kitchen and one bathroom. The best feature about the house is, it has a spacious living area and has a fireplace too.

In addition

, the neighbourhood is very friendly. The street is mostly occupied by working couples and singles. Weekly gatherings are organised every weekend by the community and I am looking to join the one

that is

to be held

this

Sunday.

Also

, I have made some friends and we are looking to hang out for a coffee next week.

Furthermore

, I am organising a housewarming party in two weeks and I would like to have your presence. Please do bring Lisa

along with

you. I am excited to show you both around the house. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks and regards, Dhinushika.

Submitted by dhinushika_m on Mon May 01 2023

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