You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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Dear Jamie, I have got a new job in New Jersey and I moved into my new accommodation

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week. It is a two-bedroom apartment with an open kitchen and one bathroom. The best feature about the house is, it has a spacious living area and has a fireplace too.

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, the neighbourhood is very friendly. The street is mostly occupied by working couples and singles. Weekly gatherings are organised every weekend by the community and I am looking to join the one

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to be held

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Sunday.

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, I have made some friends and we are looking to hang out for a coffee next week.

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, I am organising a housewarming party in two weeks and I would like to have your presence. Please do bring Lisa

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you. I am excited to show you both around the house. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks and regards, Dhinushika.

Submitted by dhinushika_m on Mon May 01 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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