Nowadays, more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Now we are leaving in the modern era and for that , the reason we do have not enough
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for other types of work like cooking meals. Most of the family want to try to take a meal from outside. In my ,opinion is that
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is a totally worthless and unconscious activity for bringing
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from outside. It is happening in our daily life in every home, most of the
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we took
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from restaurants because of that, we have no interest in making dishes for all family members. If they want to make
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dinner for all
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need some preparation before cooking and need some grocery items from the shop. So
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is another burden for making the dish. People are not much conscious about nutritious meals and healthy life.
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, in our modern society most of us are doing a job and they are passing our
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outside they have an interest in making
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and
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they are having different types of diseases and facing obesity problems.
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, for your leaving need the right amount of nutrition and mineral. And your mental growth and physical growth need an everyday balanced diet.
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balance of nutrition we cannot achieve from
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kind of
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which meals we are taking from the restaurant. Most of them are producing
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in unhealthy and unhygienic ways. After consuming most of the
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we faced physical disorders and health hazards. In conclusion, if we consume daily junk
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our health condition will day by day will decrease. So I totally disagree about the outsider
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide variety
  • international cuisines
  • preparation
  • cooking
  • costly
  • health impact
  • lack of control
  • ingredients
  • environmental concerns
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