The charts shows numbers of UK tourists visiting two countries from 2010 to 2013.

The charts shows numbers of UK tourists visiting two countries from 2010 to 2013.
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The chart illustrates foreigners that travelled to a specific
Carribbean
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Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
,
majority
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the majority
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of the tourists stayed on the
island
over the period, fewer prefer to spend their holidays on cruise ships, despite minor fluctuations.
However
, in recent
years
, visitors that boarded cruise ships surpassed those on the
island
, since the mid of 2015. It is apparent that the total number of people from foreign countries that paid a visit to the Caribbean
Island
generally increased steadily throughout the
years
. There were approximately 0.2
million
travellers on cruise ships
at
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in
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2010, before increasing to 0.5
million
at
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in
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2011 and back again to the level of 2010
during
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in
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2012. Since
then
, there had been a steady increase in the numbers, reaching 2
million
at
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in
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the year 2017.
This
was nearly a ten-fold increase compared to 7
years
ago. Visitors on the
island
were at around 0.7
milion
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million
in the
years
2010 and 2011, which
then
increased dramatically to 1.5
million
in the year 2013.
This
number remained constant until 2015 before receding to about 1.2
million
and rebounded back to 1.5
million
.
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