The charts shows numbers of UK tourists visiting two countries from 2010 to 2013.

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The chart illustrates foreigners that travelled to a specific

Carribbean

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Caribbean

island

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from 2010 to 2017.

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majority

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the majority

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of the tourists stayed on the

island

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over the period, fewer prefer to spend their holidays on cruise ships, despite minor fluctuations.

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, in recent

years

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, visitors that boarded cruise ships surpassed those on the

island

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, since the mid of 2015. It is apparent that the total number of people from foreign countries that paid a visit to the Caribbean

Island

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generally increased steadily throughout the

years

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. There were approximately 0.2

million

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travellers on cruise ships

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2010, before increasing to 0.5

million

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2011 and back again to the level of 2010

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2012. Since

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, there had been a steady increase in the numbers, reaching 2

million

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the year 2017.

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was nearly a ten-fold increase compared to 7

years

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ago. Visitors on the

island

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were at around 0.7

milion

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million

in the

years

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2010 and 2011, which

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increased dramatically to 1.5

million

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in the year 2013.

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number remained constant until 2015 before receding to about 1.2

million

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and rebounded back to 1.5

million

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

185 words

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The charts shows numbers of UK tourists visiting two countries from 2010 to 2013.

10.Some people think that language school be taught in small classes, while other people think the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Full- time students should not spend a lot of time on studying, but the should be involved in other activities too. To what extend do you agree or disagree?