You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates, over 9
years
and four wide countries, the thefts per thousand vehicles. From an
overall
perspective, it's evident that all processes starting from the year 1990, to end in the month of December 1999. The countries taken into consideration are Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada. Visibly clearly, GB is the country with the highest percentage
overall
; Rather the Canada, which demonstrates the lowest results.
To begin
with, in the year 1990 a high fraction of 17 thefts is reached in Britain,
while
for the cases of the other 3 countries , their proportion is between 5 and 10. Following the
years
, Gb will still be on top,
however
, it will face a decline in the year 1993, to increase again
consequently
, and end up next after 3
years
with another decrease.
On the other hand
, Canada and France will show a quite similar process of up and down repeatedly. The case of Swidden
,
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will deal with growth during the process.
To sum up
, with what has already been compared, it's relevant to highlight that, for some cases, 9
years
will bring vantages,
whereas
for some others just disadvantages.
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