*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*

*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*
The line chart illustrates the expenditure on three types of manufacture (
Margarine
, Low fat & reduce spread and
butter
) between 1981 to 2007. Units measured in
grams
. Looking for an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that low fat & reduce products started in 1996, and become the most popular spread. Both
Margarine
and
butter
fall dramatically
at the end
of time. In 1981, the statistic only conducts
margarine
and
butter
, standing at about 98 and 145
grams
respectively.
However
, the expenditure on
Margarine
drop marginally in 1986 and replace
butter
as the most common product in 1991. The among of
butter
reverse the trend in the
last
two years, it
finally
surpasses
margarine
in 2006, finishing at 55
grams
in 2007 and
margarine
at only 40
grams
. In terms of the low fat & reduce item, it appears with a sharp increase. it exceed
margarine
and
butter
successively in 2000 and 2001, peaking at 80
grams
per year.
This
healthier manufacture is getting the most consumer's favour which made the number of 75
grams
in 2007.
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