*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*

*The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007*
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The line chart illustrates the expenditure on three types of manufacture (
Margarine
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, Low fat & reduce spread and
butter
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) between 1981 to 2007. Units measured in
grams
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. Looking for an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that low fat & reduce products started in 1996, and become the most popular spread. Both
Margarine
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and
butter
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fall dramatically
at the end
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of time. In 1981, the statistic only conducts
margarine
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and
butter
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, standing at about 98 and 145
grams
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respectively.
However
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, the expenditure on
Margarine
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drop marginally in 1986 and replace
butter
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as the most common product in 1991. The among of
butter
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reverse the trend in the
last
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two years, it
finally
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surpasses
margarine
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in 2006, finishing at 55
grams
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in 2007 and
margarine
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at only 40
grams
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. In terms of the low fat & reduce item, it appears with a sharp increase. it exceed
margarine
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and
butter
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successively in 2000 and 2001, peaking at 80
grams
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per year.
This
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healthier manufacture is getting the most consumer's favour which made the number of 75
grams
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in 2007.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 3 times.
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