Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The use of social
media
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is rapidly increasing nowadays. Certainly, there are many different
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on us. The most discussed
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are attention spans. In my opinion,
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social
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has its benefits but we should be careful about
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spans
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deficit.
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, the benefits of
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social
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can not be ignored. Especially about communication with people who live
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long distances.
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the social
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applications
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as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter provided
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connection between people in the pandemic.
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social
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is developed a lot of
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opportunities, so
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business
lines are created. The most common sample is The Metaverse.
The social
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media
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is a part of our lives now, we must accept
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, but we must learn what is the bad
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.
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, one of the most known bad
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is
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decrease in attention spans. The
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the reduced attention spans is very quickly switching between screens. Sometimes we decide to change the screens but the worst thing is the application decides it.
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Instagram Reels or the
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of TikTok. In there, the flow is too fast, and maybe
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created the
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about
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fast flowing. Even though
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real life does not continue
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that speed. We should
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the
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and we must protect ourselves and our children from the bad
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of social
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. In conclusion, I believe that
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social
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will take up more
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in our lives, And we can never avoid that. So we should keep
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with
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social
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but we have to realize what is good or bad about it.
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