Many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of social

media

is rapidly increasing nowadays. Certainly, there are many different

effects

on us. The most discussed

effects

are attention spans. In my opinion,

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social

media

has its benefits but we should be careful about

attentions

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spans

also

attentions

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deficit.

Firstly

, the benefits of

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social

media

can not be ignored. Especially about communication with people who live

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long distances.

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the social

media

applications

such

as Facebook, Instagram and Twitter provided

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connection between people in the pandemic.

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social

media

is developed a lot of

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opportunities, so

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business

lines are created. The most common sample is The Metaverse.

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media

is a part of our lives now, we must accept

this

, but we must learn what is the bad

effects

.

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, one of the most known bad

effects

is

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decrease in attention spans. The

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the reduced attention spans is very quickly switching between screens. Sometimes we decide to change the screens but the worst thing is the application decides it.

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Instagram Reels or the

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application

of TikTok. In there, the flow is too fast, and maybe

that is

created the

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about

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fast flowing. Even though

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real life does not continue

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that speed. We should

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the

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and we must protect ourselves and our children from the bad

effects

of social

media

. In conclusion, I believe that

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social

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will take up more

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in our lives, And we can never avoid that. So we should keep

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with

socail

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social

media

but we have to realize what is good or bad about it.