You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home

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Dear Mrs Salina, Hope you all are doing well. I am writing to you to express my gratitude towards you guys, as I and our family are moving to another city in a few days.

Firstly

, I would like to thank you for your loveable support for us during our stay

besides

you. In fact, I am so delighted to have you next door. You always helped us through thick and thin. Even, I have kept our precious memories with me. It's very hard to say goodbye to all of you now.

In addition

to that, I will miss

this

place since we are living here for 20 years and the ambience of the area has always been vibrant. The field around our house has given us a pleasant and pollution-free environment. In spite of the greenery, several amenities were around there. I hope will get the same neighbourhood things over there.

Finally

, I am so excited to invite you to our new house and we have organised an opening ceremony next Sunday at our place. Please do visit us with your whole family. The city we are relocating to is Delhi, just give me a call when you reached the railway station. I will come to pick you up. Thank you for your Love and support during our stay. Yours Sincerely Heena Chadda

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

224 words

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Some people say that art subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the advertising, businesses nowadaways usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you thinkn it is a positive or negative development?

Newspapers have immense influence on people. why? is it a positive or negative situation?