The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The chart illustrates the

relation

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between the power demanded by consumers and the supply of power generated using

fossils

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fossil

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fuels. The data refers to the city of

freedonia

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Freedonia

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, in the years between 1985 and 2005. Both the curves represented present a trend variation and a stall

periode

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period

. The

offer

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offered

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line grows at

first,

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secondly

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decreases and

last

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but not least stalls.

On the other

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hand

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the need for energy starts decreasing,

nexst

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stalls

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and

finally

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increases. In 1995 it can be observed that

fredonia

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Fredonia

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had a deficit

around

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one and a half units of power

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apply

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since the electricity required by its inhabitants was greater than the resources available.

Briefly

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after that things improved and the town not just found a break-even point, they

also

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exeeded

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exceeded

the demand to the point that in 1995

fredonia

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Fredonia

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had a surplus of more than 3 units. The abundance kept growing until 1995

where

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when

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both the trends of consumption and production inverted.

At the end

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of the

1990s

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the two curves met, but things kept getting worst as the

situatios

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situations

situation

presented in 1985 repeated.

The

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In the

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following years the deficit gap grew to more than 4 units.

gianfrancosalocchiWed May 03 2023

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

191 words

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