The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph shows the demand for energy and the energy available for fossil fuels in Freedonia from 1985 to 2005. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart illustrates the
relation
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between the power demanded by consumers and the supply of power generated using
fossils
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fuels. The data refers to the city of
freedonia
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Freedonia
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, in the years between 1985 and 2005. Both the curves represented present a trend variation and a stall
periode
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period
. The
offer
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line grows at
first,
secondly
decreases and
last
but not least stalls.
On the other
hand
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the need for energy starts decreasing,
nexst
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next
stalls
,
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and
finally
increases. In 1995 it can be observed that
fredonia
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Fredonia
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had a deficit
around
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one and a half units of power
,
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since the electricity required by its inhabitants was greater than the resources available.
Briefly
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after that things improved and the town not just found a break-even point, they
also
exeeded
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exceeded
the demand to the point that in 1995
fredonia
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had a surplus of more than 3 units. The abundance kept growing until 1995
where
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both the trends of consumption and production inverted.
At the end
of the
1990s
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the two curves met, but things kept getting worst as the
situatios
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situations
situation
presented in 1985 repeated.
The
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following years the deficit gap grew to more than 4 units.
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