The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The bar graph illustrates the change in time to spend household-matter in a week in three different categories of
women
and men
. Generally, as the number of children
is increased, it can be seen significant growth in women
's figures while
men
's are slightly decreased.
Regarding the figure
without children
, women
's figure
shows 30 hours, and this
is more than third-two times of men
. The gap of this
time considerably grows as the number of children
increases. Women
who have one or two children
consume the daily tasks for 50 hours per week, while
the result for men
remains unchanged. Moreover
, when they have three or more children
, the women
's figure
reaches around 60 hours which is more than three times of men
's figure
.
In conclusion, there is a huge difference in time-related
to the number of Correct your spelling
time related
children
they have. But this
trend could appear only for women
, and men
's figures did not change no matter how they had children
.Submitted by pekora on
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