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It is universally accepted that eating too much sugar has negative effects on people’s health. Therefore, some believe that governments should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to control their sugar intake. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's
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 it is common to see that
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 eat
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plenty of products that comprise
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sugar
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. It has a negative influence on their health. Some
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 think that how much
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 is consumed by
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 should be controlled by governments,
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 others believe that it is individual responsibility and everyone should take
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 themselves. I tend to agree with the latter argument and will support my opinion with examples. First and foremost, supermarkets provide a wide selection of
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, which is not always wholesome and nutritious, but high in fats and
sugar
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. I suppose that governments can impose high taxes on sugary products.
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, they can provide more
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that is
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 rich in antioxidants and vitamins
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 of a big amount of sweet things to
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 shops.
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, the number of
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 buying sweet things will decrease.
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,
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 know and are aware of what they buy and what kind of
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 is healthy for them. Choosing what to eat is a basic human right. No one should
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 the choice of eating.
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, if a person eats a big amount of
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, no one should limit that choice. A person should
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 what he eats by themselves because only he knows what can damage their health and what is not.
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, consuming a lot of products that contain a lot of
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 has a negative impact on
people
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's health. In my opinion,
people
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 should
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 how much
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 they consume and nobody can influence
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their decision.
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