You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In the letter: · describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake · explain where you think the waste has come from · suggest what the council should do about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sardor O'tkirov and I am residing at home near a lake . A few weeks ago , I live there very happily . Because around the lake is very clean. But these days , I and my family members are finding a lot of garbage around the lake . Most of the rubbish is plastic bottles and packages. I bring all of them to the garbage dump . But they kept coming back . In my opinion, visitors are throwing away everything they bring with them every day .

Moreover

, the local population is not cleaning there .

That is

why , there is a lot of rubbish .

Furthermore

, they throw out their trash around the beach . From my point of view , you have to increase control.

That is

, You need to get a new worker here as a guard .

In addition

, you need to collect the local population and clean it . I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply . SARDORBEK Sardor O'tkirov

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7 paragraphs

183 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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