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You have discovered a lot of rubbish in a lake near where you live. In the past, the lake had always been clean. Write a letter to the local council. In the letter: · describe the type of rubbish that you saw in the lake · explain where you think the waste has come from · suggest what the council should do about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sardor O'tkirov and I am residing at home near a lake . A few weeks ago , I live there very happily . Because around the lake is very clean. But these days , I and my family members are finding a lot of garbage around the lake . Most of the rubbish is plastic bottles and packages. I bring all of them to the garbage dump . But they kept coming back . In my opinion, visitors are throwing away everything they bring with them every day .
Moreover
, the local population is not cleaning there .
That is
 why , there is a lot of rubbish .
Furthermore
, they throw out their trash around the beach . From my point of view , you have to increase control.
That is
 , You need to get a new worker here as a guard .
In addition
, you need to collect the local population and clean it . I hope you will look into the matter and give me an immediate reply . SARDORBEK Sardor O'tkirov
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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