Your friend needs your advice on how to improve her eating habits and keep fit. Write a letter with 150 words.

Dear Mary, Thanks very much for your letter .I'm very happy that you passed your exam. Of

course

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,course

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I'm only too glad to help.There are a few activities you improve her eating habits and get fit. First of all ,I thank you should eat plenty of fish fruit and vegetables.

This

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product

help

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helps

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you that follow

balanced

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a balanced

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diet , won'

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put on weight . Because they are full of various

vitamin

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vitamins

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In addition

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, You don'

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try to eat so much junk food

Correct word choice

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sweets and My only advice isn'

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to go everywhere by car or bus. If you go to walk your body won'

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store so much sugar and fat . You have overweight . Fatness cause many diseases . Another good idea is to join a gym - exercise regularly because you do something , your body won'

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become lazy I hope my advice helps Don'

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stoping moving .If you can'

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achieve to improve her eating habits .Because

this

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may take a long time Write and let me know what

heppens

Correct your spelling

happens

. Yours, Nozima.

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May 3, 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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