Your friend needs your advice on how to improve her eating habits and keep fit. Write a letter with 150 words.
Dear Mary,
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I'm only too glad to help.There are a few activities you improve her eating habits and get fit.
First of all ,I thank you should eat plenty of fish fruit and vegetables. Add a comma
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product help
you that follow Change the verb form
helps
balanced
diet , won'Add an article
a balanced
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put on weight . Because they are full of various vitamin
. Fix the agreement mistake
vitamins
In addition
, You don't
try to eat so much junk foodCorrect word choice
or
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to go everywhere by car or bus. If you go to walk your body won't
store so much sugar and fat . You have overweight . Fatness cause many diseases .
Another good idea is to join a gym - exercise regularly because you do something , your body won't
become lazy
I hope my advice helps Don't
stoping moving .If you can't
achieve to improve her eating habits .Because this
may take a long time Write and let me know what heppens
.
Yours,
Nozima.Correct your spelling
happens
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,