You are desirous of improving the state of your local area for the youth. Write a letter to the editor of a community magazine with ideas for how this could be done. In your letter, write how the number of leisure facilities available can be increased explain how these would benefit the area suggest some possible ways by which young people can be involved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my ideas to upgrade the state of our locality for the welfare of the young generation. I am a member of

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society for the past 5 years and I have not seen the local government has done anything for the youth. Even though I wrote to the council earlier, there has been no major upgrade so far. If you provide me with your support, I would like to propose 2 new sports clubs in our locality having state of art facilities.

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would not only benefit the children or youths in getting into sports but

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improve their fitness level. Though I have involved the young people as volunteers, I would request your community magazine to publish these ideas and get some attention from our council. As I started forming the local soccer team, proper facilities would motivate these younger ones and help them to go higher and achieve success. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Vikas Garg

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